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paulpdjh
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Yes, thanks for sharing. That is an interesting script... poor Dr Keel!
I wonder what the background to this is and who wrote it. Given that mobile phones are mentioned it must have been written relatively recently - well within the last 20 years!
Edit: Found the background:
http://www.mzp-tv.co.uk/forum/archived-pitches-and-pilots/the-avengers-(with-pilot)/
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Timeless A-Peel
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How fascinating! I actually really enjoyed this. It felt very true to the show, especially the first half, and it does a nice job of retconning things to create its own take on the Avengers universe (Rhonda and Keel's backstories, the death of Mr.Gale). My biggest issue with it is the future setting--I just can't reconcile Avengerland with constant references to Twitter and iPhones (and really, Cathy never strikes me as one to be into social networking. If you're going to pick someone to take on those sorts of things, Emma or Tara would be much more suitable characters. Mercifully, he's made Steed as unimpressed with it all as he would be). Some of Cathy's dialogue jars a bit, too--she talks a little too casually, and she's a bit too flippant. But all in all, it's an enjoyable take--I've certainly read worse--and I liked it. Great that someone decided to use the Keel/Gale era as a setting this time, as opposed to the Emma seasons. Thanks for posting this! 
(But please, not Dominic West and Keeley Hawes for the leads.)
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Mona
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Nope! Didn't know about it. Thanks for putting it on the Forum.
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ischtar
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Nope! Didn't know about it. Thanks for putting it on the Forum.
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ischtar
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This picture is part of a new photo story The (im)perfect weekend with John Steed and Emma Peel, who would like to spent a lazy weekend in Steed's cottage in the South of England, but...
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Sinus1994
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| Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 3:14 am Post subject: |
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EEEeeeekkkk! 
So excited... Can't wait to see it!
Don't keep us waiting ischtar. 
Sincerely yours,
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oneknightsteed
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| Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:45 pm Post subject: |
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I am giddy with anticipation!
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Sinus1994
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| Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:39 am Post subject: |
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OMG!!!
It's finished!
Thank you so much ischtar.
And I'm mentioned...so proud! xD
Didn't you say, that it will be published on Tuesday?
Sincerely yours,
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ischtar
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Thank you Sinus, it was very kind of you to do the beta reading!!!
I had only two pictures left - so it was finished on Monday!
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Sinus1994
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| Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:15 am Post subject: |
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My pleasure!
You can "beta-read" my next story.
Hehe.
Sincerely yours,
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ischtar
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Mona
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Arf!able shots of Steed with shirt undone and stricken look on his face. Not sure what else happened in the story, but I do remember that!
Nice, Ischtar!
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Frankymole
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| Mona wrote: | Arf!able shots of Steed with shirt undone and stricken look on his face. Not sure what else happened in the story, but I do remember that!
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I wish Honor Blackman had done such scenes...
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Fun story Ischtar! Thanks to you and Sinus for putting this together. Or should I say 'fangs' alot!
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ischtar
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I'm glad you liked the story
AND I FORGOT TO CREDIT SINUS 
Sinus was the mastermind behind the basic story, I only changed a bit here and there
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Sinus1994
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| Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:26 am Post subject: |
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And you did all the work, didn't you?
I love the story.
So sad, that Steed woke up at the most interesting moment.
Just wonder how the dream could have went on... 
Sincerely yours,
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Cariheart
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| Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2012 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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Great little Halloween story! Thanks Sinus & Ischtar!
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Sinus1994
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It' so well written and very in character.
Sadly, it's so short... 
Yours sincerely,
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